2009年1月13日 星期二

The biginning of agriculture

this websit is about the people is farm 12,000 years ago. you know why beause we need find food to eat . in befor the lot thing can't find so every became to farm. in befor no computer , tv .... so they use rock to make farm . the picture is how they make . this websit talk to me a lot we must to do all thing foe self. can't always ask some one .
in befor is more big then other people. prople farm. the king eat every years is sam. so people every day must work hart. they help who? not they self they help there kimg . they poor king became rich . alkl the king only need to eat.the king want more big place they need to fight die people is not king is our. this websit is tell me to every do want thing or talk some is help we can't be angry or sad.picture i think is help king farm people.
this website is fun. it have a music. it about farm animals. you can chose 1 anmails it have ture picture. i chose dog it name call puppy. we don't now her true name so every one call her puppy. she live with a man. she like to walk with tom. this website tell me anmails is our helrers so we need good for they to. picture 3 is farm picture 4 is puppy .

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Savant English School 提到...

You're getting better at this blogging. The last two weeks have been a definite improvement. 1) try to separate your captions for the photos; and 2 )you need to more clearly state "what I did there". Otherwise, this is ok.